- Good Question - Perhaps needs a bit of rephrasing
- Identifying male/female roles is appropriate for topic and question - need to link it to audience though
(how it impacts each gender)
- Some of those quotes were interesting - but too much text and no real discussion of them (particurlarly the critical comments)
- Mentioning secondary texts is helpful but needs to link to question and topic. Particurlarly stereotypes in mainstream shows like Eastenders.
- There is a lack of depth - tell us about those key scenes and how the link to question/audience
- Some big questions here about religion, comedy and stereotypes. Need to address these in much more detail in the essay.
- Question and Answer got good discussion going
- Question of whether Muslims are offended is a really interesting aspect - make this a major aspect of critical investigation.
What went well;
Created a good debate and an on going discussion.
Got the audience involved.
Chosen question got a lot of response, giving more and more different aspects I could write my critical investigation based on.
I managed to use at least one theory in my presentation to describe the narrative.
I used a range of examples that linked well with my chosen topic.
Even better if;
I had done more preparation and rehearsed.
Spoke about each section in more depth - in order to address my point clearer.
I had used more theories to relate.
Used more up to date examples in order to back up my argument.
Focused more on my question rather than other aspects of the topic.
In order to turn my Ignite Presentation into a top quality Critical Investigation, I need to make sure that I adjust my question and make sure that it
